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"Same Kind of Day"
She moved very well
A dancer she was
She was sliding
She was gliding
I tried to hold her
She was so holy,
I tried to hold her
Sad and slowly she smiled at me
No one knows me she said
It's kind of dark tonight
Please turn on the lights
I'm feeling kind of lonely
Let me hear your friendly voice
Let your light shine down
Then I would be able to make into the morning
She had a dream
I had my prayer
She was weaving my dreams
As I slept beside her
I dreamed of an empty closet & an empty heart
So I sent my heart ahead & tried to follow
Then I just watch for awhile then I started to wander
I know I have a lifetime of loneliness
But it won't last to long because I'll be gone
All I want is one more tomorrow
What's that all about
Well I got no place to go now
How do I like my life
All I want is one more tomorrow
My day won't start because it's an empty morning
Empty life, empty bed
I'm not here so you must be gone
It's dark in here
You took off with the sun
Empty mailbox & know one here to pick up the mail
There's nothing in the mailbox
There's nothing in my heart.
I'm feeling kind of lonely & my day won't start
You came into my mind
I have lonely songs that you left behind
Inside each song is a part of me
I dreamed of being your music
Dreaming that the music is full of you
Since you've gone
It's only the lonely songs you left behind
She had a dream
I had my prayer
She was weaving my dreams
As I slept beside her
Seeyouma
12/22/05
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zoupi
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Joined: September 25, 2008
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`That a well pretty post. Just, are you shure the date is the last good one ?
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zoupi wrote: `That a well pretty post. Just, are you shure the date is the last good one ?
Should be 2009
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`what do you mean? i date all my words when i composed & finished them.
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`IT MEANS WE THINK IT SHOULD BE IN THE NOW!!
GREAT POEM!!
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theycallhergrac
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`What a beautiful post! Thank you for sharing!
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`thank you theycall, nice to hear something postive.
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zoupi
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`All what is beautiful leads to positive attitude.
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nightchant wrote: `thank you theycall, nice to hear something postive.
Didn't think my post was a negative, just thought it could be a poem in the now..
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`i see. well for your info, this was written in dec. 05 & copywrited on the scme date. i don't change anything once it's completed & thank you.
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nightchant wrote: `i see. well for your info, this was written in dec. 05 & copywrited on the scme date. i don't change anything once it's completed & thank you.
YOU ARE MOST WELCOME
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