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Love's Hole (clean version)

 
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anewmoon




anewmoon

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Posts: 66

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My brain is swelling so I thought to write. I just made up the title, I gotta work with that. This is purely for educational purposes and a first copy.
I am also feeling blah and blah about love and emotions... I also ate a sausage being writing this and the dead pig was messing with me. This introduction was classified as "Too Much Information".
Thank you heart broken Ravens around the world for showing me threw the absence of light. Especially you Munin... and anyone else that wonders what I am going on about.

LOVE'S HOLE
Blew a hole the road
Running back to you
by the time I returned anew
Our house was gone

Started running back home
I ran so fast
When I hit that hole full of old words
I nearly died

Why does the sky fall
When my emotions rise
And when I'm ready to sow
The soil is desert dry

When I need to be humble
I wear my past like a crown
When I want to hold you
My love is no where found

Hole in the road
I hear you calling
I keep running to the sound
Forgetting I nearly died

Hole in the road
Every time I run into you
It always hurts

I'm taking the long way around

It's dark and primal
There's no up and down
There will be friends at the end
When I love again

I will build anew house
And make that hole flat land
Quiet and secure
As this dream in my hand

RWE
(latenight version upon request...lol...)



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windsongbirdzz9




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`I think it's great. Keep up the good work ty for sharing

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brokeheartedgal
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`found my niche in Nietzsche
heard what the skanks had to say
'you make the devil a playground'

said he'd be the pavement of the streets
I walk upon n whistle for my shuffle

The jokers and the crazy 8

Laugh now he's crushed the
pearls
Inside my guttersnipe mouth

Skanks say what they want to say anyway

The bough is breakin
Everything's shakin
The aversion to disgust

s---, Nietzsche was so right





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whiteowl47
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Hey there brokeheartedgal !!

You were born in the Chinese Year of the [earth] Horse !

Horse 'Medicine' is 'Power' in Nat. American Lore.

Keep writing from your heart....that's good.

But throw back your beautiful 'mane' and rear up in defiance !

Prance like a young filly and stamp your hooves.

Sparks flying as you gallop under thundering skys.....unafraid.

Take back your Power ! But be gentle on your mind.

'Walk your talk'......But speak from a loving heart...your true heart.

Hugs,.............whiteowl47


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