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![former member former member default image - bird flying away](/images/shared/member/100w/deleteduser.jpg) wanderingspirit (deleted)
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Posted: Post subject: Earth mother "from my heart 2 yours" |
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I wrote this while channeling mother Gaia:
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When you stand alone, admiring a tree
think of me
When the sunlight stings your eyes, and warms your skin
I am with thee
Under the light of the moon, cloaked in despair
I am there
When the rain falls all around you
I am everywhere
See me in her eyes, see me in your own
See me in his eyes, know you're not alone
No matter your deeds, or what you have done
I shall love forever, my children all as one
So connect, and embrace me
Don't take me for granted
Give back, show some love
For the seeds you have planted
The drama and chaos of this world
Let that all go
Have unconditional love for all
And true freedom, ye shall know
"The love you withhold is the pain that you carry"
Know this to be true
For love and respect is all that I could ever want,
and all I'll ask of you.
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anewmoon
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Joined: May 10, 2009
Posts: 66
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Posted: Post subject: Write it up! |
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I am grateful to be the first to reply.
I think your style of writing is on the point!
The tempo flow and lyrical concentration was superb!
Really, I'm soaking up Talib Kweli on my headphones... Eardrums and RPM (two albums).
And while I'm reading you fit right in.
You are the point! Seriously.
Write iit up!
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seanachi
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Joined: January 11, 2010
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`Straight from the heart~ with eloquence of spirit!
Beautiful...
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![former member former member default image - bird flying away](/images/shared/member/100w/deleteduser.jpg) aussiekelly1 (deleted)
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`Lovely piece L. xx Kel
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