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riverotter
riverotter
Joined: May 17, 2008
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Posted: Post subject: The Dance |
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Silently and slowly we begin
testing, daring,challenging.
One biding-one abiding
in unison we glide
and I fell her muscles contract and soften.
A breath away
yet our eyes never meet
though her eyes coyly caress my face.
My eyes set the path while hers
fathom our wake.
Intoxicating wafts of perfume fire my feavor
fuels my motions
and gives rise to perfection of motion.
One last note and she melts in my arms
and with a last backward glance
she vanishes into the night
leaving only the lingering scent of her perfume.
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`ohh very very nice!!!!!
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Posted: Post subject: Re: The Dance |
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Breath betrays her far away glance
speeding up without permission.
Heart pumps erratic
face burns, blood surged.
Calm surface, her secret armour.
Look away quick
Don't let him catch your eyes caressing his face.
Desires inside her
pressing hard into his invisible space.
Take in breath
breathe deep
breathe deeper . . .
Time has come
to meet with potent gaze.
Silent surrender
to the dance of hearts.
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jewelee
jewelee
Joined: December 19, 2006
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`What a beautiful poem. Took me away...and I was there.
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`I appreciate your appreciation, thank you jewelee.
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blackfootedgirl
blackfootedgirl
Joined: August 20, 2008
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`There is a Poetry Group in the Member Defined/described Groups for people like us who both write or just enjoy poetry
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`thank you for sharing that beautiful gift~~
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`Riverotter is amazing with words...a true gift to read.
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