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I walked the desert that night, like so many nights before,
whatching the stars and listenign to the wind.
The sounds of the night,tonight were loud,
undefinable,all mingled into one voice.
I break into a run,racing over the sand,the rocks, the brush.
running so hard and long I pray for death to ease the burn of my heart.
No longer can I go. I falter, stumbleing,falling to the gorund,braced on hands and knees,my heart pounding against my chest, in my ears,
breath gasping. i turn and fall backwards into hard sand. rocks hurting my back,cares not.
looks up into the night sky where no stars twinkle tonight.
only darkness. The wind harsh.
all goes silent. save for a single high note. a Coyote howling in empathy.
his howl not the laughing voice calling out for unity from his family, it is the long drawn out signal of dispare, sadness at the loss of something tangable
it brings me back, wakes me up. ...fullmetal



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`They conjure up so many...images...of what you describe...and probably different in everyone's mind...and yet involving the same things that you describe...the night...the sky...the coyote..and the sound of it...very evocative /smiles.

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Smiles.. thanks, glad you liked it. had a bit of a rough one last night

listening to Alannis this mornign.
may write more.. later.... smiles.


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