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anewmoon




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Attempting to flee the land the seed jumped into the water....


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anewmoon




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When i went down to the river to play the harmonica; to this place i always go. There was a man in a suit and shiny shoes. He stood under this Maple tree that bows to the river, with roots unearth'd by the water's flow. A little taken back that I would have to share with a well dressed man with clean cut, combed back hair. I was amazed as I gazed wondering what he might be like and how he got down there. The precipice is steep and rocks can roll, you really have to nimble to avoid a fall. Yet he looked quite fresh, like he had just left the boardroom; he had not a bead of running sweat.

My favourite rock was right beside luggage that he must of carried down. It was like a suitcase, it looked rather heavy just sitting there flat on the ground. The baggage I brought was in my head and my possessions were small; the harp and some matches, a pipe and some herbs I picked and dried from the rich green earth. I thought what could he have brought down here; the man was fresh, I could smell his scent in the air.

I knew he knew, that I was curiously approaching; when I slipped and tipped a small limestone slide, he had to look and he spoke, "You alright over there".

"Yeah, thanks," I answered, regaining some composure.
"I was unprepared to see anyone down here", I made aware.

He smiled and continued to watch the River and without and warning he started to deliver a song in a language I had yet to hear. A sound that made me shiver.

It was short and sharp, I swear, even the black birds stopped talking to hear.
"Would you like to know your future", he turned to me and said.
"For a simple gift, let me commune with the dead and we can help you prepare for what, you, one day must share".

Well, I smiled wildly and lowered my eyes; I questioned him like a child.
"Whose dead?".
"Our Dead", and with two steps back he bent to one knee and opened his case so, I, could easily see.

Oh so precariously I stepped to the scene. I kept watching his face it was more beautiful and strong than any man's had ever been. I stopped, agog, of this magnificent man. I, know I am straight but what a man, with such focused hands.
"Where are You from?", left my mouth.

He smiled again, like he knew I knew and without hesitation he opened the case. From within came blinding light like the Sun reflecting of a mirror. When my sight was restored, the suitcase was full of sand, soft, suede, ghostly sand.

He stuck his hand in and pulled out an arrow with a thin flint tip and the supple fletches of a sparrow.

"For the reason you came, I will let you write you name upon this Eternity and you will not leave the same", he smiled.
He offer'd me the end without any smile and I look'd up to the sky; the clouds had made a turtle.

I pulled out my harmonica and began to play; for it was my only
intention to pray. That is why I came and I could never give that away.
When I caught my breath and opened my eyes, the clean cut, well dressed man had just disappeared and all that remained was a single shiny grain of sand.
So I continued to play and pray to the sky and water that day.

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`what i liked about this story was that you would not compromise what you had set out to do , you tell a great story i can actually see it in my mind.

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`Yes lovely...both men had a reason to be there. Different, but wanting the same thing, perhaps... a moment in peace. Yes, it's a peaceful story.

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