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Earth mother "from my heart 2 yours"

 
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wanderingspirit
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Posted:     Post subject: Earth mother "from my heart 2 yours"

I wrote this while channeling mother Gaia:

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When you stand alone, admiring a tree

think of me


When the sunlight stings your eyes, and warms your skin

I am with thee


Under the light of the moon, cloaked in despair

I am there


When the rain falls all around you

I am everywhere


See me in her eyes, see me in your own

See me in his eyes, know you're not alone


No matter your deeds, or what you have done

I shall love forever, my children all as one


So connect, and embrace me

Don't take me for granted


Give back, show some love

For the seeds you have planted


The drama and chaos of this world

Let that all go


Have unconditional love for all

And true freedom, ye shall know


"The love you withhold is the pain that you carry"

Know this to be true


For love and respect is all that I could ever want,

and all I'll ask of you.

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anewmoon




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PostPosted:     Post subject: Write it up!
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I am grateful to be the first to reply.
I think your style of writing is on the point!
The tempo flow and lyrical concentration was superb!

Really, I'm soaking up Talib Kweli on my headphones... Eardrums and RPM (two albums).
And while I'm reading you fit right in.

You are the point! Seriously.
Write iit up!



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`Straight from the heart~ with eloquence of spirit!
Beautiful...

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`Lovely piece L. xx Kel

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